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Review:Patrick says:
Firstly, I am the biggest idiot. I read this chapter earlier this morning and thought it was last weeks update. I then checked the update date and saw it was released yesterday and realised it was the latest update! Ah well. Another fantastic chapter, I'm really interested to see Harry in a muggle primary school again, can you imagine Sirius and Remus on parent teacher night? That would be utterly amazing. And totally amusing. I haven't reviewed since before Sirius's trial, so this should be a long review. The trial blew me away, the way in which you handled the confessions and the statements, it was fantastic. And the public acknowledgment of Sirius's innocence was way, way overdue!

I was blown away in regards to *spoilers* Florence being smoky. I never even considered it, but after re reading earlier chapters I found some evidence etc.

In regards to Dumbledoor, you raised a point that I never questioned, if Dumbledoor demanded a trial for Snape, a repented death eater, why didn't he do so for Sirius? Even if he thought Sirius was guilty that was an utter moral slip for Dumbledoor. And you handled Sirius's reaction perfectly, I felt his betrayal, anger and shock. And in all honesty, I would do the same in refusing contact with Dumbledoor.

I must say though my favourite character in this tale is Remus. You develop him in such a good manner, expanding on the character we see in the books. He is witty, charming and utterly self deprecating and his conversations with Tonks and Sirius are always witty, intelligent and funny!

You have a talent for writing and this is probably my favourite fan fiction that I'm currently reading. You are a great author, and I look forward to our weekly updates. I thank you very much for sharing this story with us! You are a witty, intelligent and phenomenal author. You are an utter wordsmith who can tinker with a tale and present such a different interpretation. I thank you again for this story, which is a highlight of my week.

Until next time, good luck, keep well, stay safe and have fun. And again thank you

Patrick.

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