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Review:marauderfan says:

I have to admit, I was a little surprised that Wilson Young's story agreed with David's - I was expecting some sort of fabrication there. I guess we haven't heard Delilah's side yet, but it seems Dom guessed correctly from the beginning that she was set up.

I think the best part of this chapter was the way you focused on the continuation of werewolf prejudice in society. Obviously it's against the law now to forbid werewolves to get jobs, but there's still remnants of the old prejudice. The way you wrote her trip back to the office particularly stood out, how so few of her coworkers said hello to her. Her friend Julia is great though - a good friend like that wouldn't let societal pressures get in the way of their friendship.

I'm really curious to know about Dom's first full moon as a werewolf. I like what Teddy said to her about how they can make it work, but at the same time I understand Dom's hesitance because she thinks she has to belong with a pack now. A little how Lupin felt I think, when he was trying to cut himself off from people in HBP.

Anyway, great chapter! And once again you leave the ending hanging like that so I neeed to keep reading! :p

Author's Response: Hey again! Glad to see you back for this chapter.

Dom did guess correctly yeah. I didn't want to complicate things too much, just a little to spice up the plot =)

Yes, many times even when something is legally wrong, and something has changed, doesn't mean that people's feelings towards the matter have changed. The general distrust of werewolves still lingers in people's minds here and that is what I wanted to convey. I am glad you liked that, and Julia too.

Yeah, it is indeed difficult for Dom. As for her first full moon it's coming soon ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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