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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Another great and suspenseful chapter, dear! I have so many questions; I can't wait to read the next chapter to see if any of them are answered!

First of all, I'm really curious as to what's going on with Laura. I mean, I'm pretty sure it's got something to do with the war, but I'm still very curious!

Also, I'm curious about what happened in Mary's past, since she says she can related to what Laura's going through. And speaking of Mary's past, it really broke my heart to find out that she turns away from the Slytherin table because of Wilkes.

Mary's characterization is really lovely. (Well, everyone's is, but I especially like Mary). She seems unaffected and cold, but she's not... she only SEEMS that way because she tries to block herself from her emotions... like she did by paying attention to the stairs instead of thinking about her conversation with James. And the way you described her as thinking that those thoughts were 'dangerous' was a nice touch!!

A really, really great chapter, and I'm ready for more!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! i'm glad the suspense is still coming through and unfortunately a lot of these questions you're probably having won't be answered right away.

Yah, something has happened to Laura alright and it's connected in a very real way to Mary, though neither of them really know how much it is connected. Thank you so much for your review and some of your insightful comments! It means so much to me!


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