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Review:AlexFan says:
Finally, we really get to see the Quidditch part of Brielle. I mean, I know that it's a part of the rest of the story as well but I felt like this time we really got to see the Quidditch captain side of her and I hope that you focus on that as the story goes on.

I liked the Totem Pole bit, I thought it was really cool and I haven't seen something like that before. And thank you for the explanation for it otherwise I'd have no idea how the thing worked at all.

And I don't think Bri is crazy for accepting Dom's invitation. I'm actually really glad that she did because it sounds like Dom needs a friend and as you mentioned, she's never had one before. It'll be good for Bri to be over at Dom's house and see how her life is like.

Although, by the sounds of it, shenanigans will be taking place when Bri gets there.
~Grace

Author's Response: I was excited to show more of her quidditch side which you will see a lot more in the upcoming chapters! I hope you like the more quidditch side of the story for the future.

I'm glad! It was something that I've always had planned but I just spinned it around slightly. I thought the explanation was very much needed for everyone's sake so don't worry about it!

Dom does need a friend! I'm glad you sympathize for her like I do. I think it'll do Brielle some good to see what Dominique really has to deal with.

Shenanigans are a given with Brielle. Sigh.

Lexi xx


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