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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag!

The summary of this story definitely intrigued me because I rarely come across well-written Gellert Grindelwald pieces. I have read your work before so I knew it would be good and I wasn't disappointed =)

You've provided a very unique take on Gellert. Your characterisation of him is very much in line with what we know of him in canon. I like the way he thinks, and his reaction to Dumbledore's letter. Speaking of the letter, I think it was brilliantly written. It really sounded like something Dumbledore would write/say.

I also enjoyed the inclusion of Bathilda Bagshot here. I loved how she was so much like an aunt should be, and she loved Gellert. The idea of her helping him run with an emergency portkey was brilliant. Her regret also shined through well towards the end, and the ending was quite fitting.

There were no grammar mistakes, and the entire piece flowed smoothly. It was interesting, original, and a likeable read.

Good job =)
9/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey!
Sorry it took so long for this response. One moment the response feature was broken, and then I fell off the face of HPFF... but I'm back now. :)

It always makes me smile when someone chooses to read this fic of their own free will. It's like, "why on earth would someone pick a Grindelwald songfic??"

Whew! So glad you liked the letter part. Bathilda seemed the logical choice for someone who viewed the events first-hand and could live to tell the tale. She lived a very long time and probably had more than a handful of regrets.

Thanks so much for the lovely review. I'm happy you enjoyed it!


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