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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hi there, here to review as requested. I really enjoyed the way you've set things up in this prologue. You didn't provide a whole lot of information, but you definitely went the mysterious route to hook readers in so that they'd want to read on to know what's going on. I also think you've created a good, solid character that we can expect more from just based on the little bit I've read here. I can't really provide further feedback than that since this prologue seems to leave more questions than answers, which is a good thing as prologues are supposed to do that (short and mysterious enough to pull you in). I will read and review the next chapter for you, though, since I automatically read&review the first two chapters of any story requested in my thread.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to be quite mysterious with the prologue, but at the same time make people curious and want to know more. And yeah! You think the character is all right so far. I know I didn't give readers much to go on in that short prologue, so it's really okay that you don't have more feedback to give. What you said was just lovely and what I needed to hear.

Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter. Thanks so much for your time and review.

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