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Review:quixotic says:
Hey, I'm here with my second review for you!

Wonderful job on the story. I love how you use simple sentences and meandering thoughts to portray Luna's character. It's like we're taking a look into Luna's brain and all the crazy thoughts that goes on in there.
Luna sounds so sweet and innocent. When she said 'I want to find a Crumple-Horned Snorkack, but no one will fund any more expeditions to find them' I felt like yelling "I'll fund your expedition! Even if I'm a minor who doesn't earn money!" I loved how she describes the world around her, relating it to some random memory from ages ago.

Mortimer is equally crazy and a character I wouldn't mind seeing more of. I was really surprised when he walked into the shop and delighted when you revealed that he was a squib. As I've always said, squibs are underrated these days. I love how he's so anal retentive and allergic to weird but wears bright yellow socks and randomly talks about opera and cheese. I like how he's trying his best not to be weird when all his efforts just make him weirder.

This is a great story and I really really hope that you decide to make a sequel to it. I want to know what happens to the two of them, whether they will meet again, or...yeah I'm way too involved in this, aren't I?

Author's Response: Thank you!!

It's nice to hear that you liked the way Luna described the world around her. She's such a difficult character to write, and I hoped I did her justice! I figured she's very perceptive about the world around her, even though she makes odd comments about it.

I'm really glad you liked Mortimer as well! You're right, squibs are underrated - there certainly aren't many stories about them. Yeah, he definitely tries not to be weird, but I think everyone's a little strange, just as Luna says in the story! :p

Haha, I love that you feel involved in it, that means I must have done my job as a writer. :) Thanks so much for your reviews today!! ♥

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