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Review:patronus_charm says:
Yo Racho! (lol that sounds weird but I wanted it to rhyme...Hmm, I will come up with a cooler greeting than hi one day)

You have a really great way of slotting in comedy in the most strangest of ways, and I mean that as a compliment. Look at this line ĎAlbus was playing this card very well. His arm had been tucked around Erinís shoulders like it was stuck there with a Permanent Sticking Charm.í It just had me cracking up for the really strange image it implanted in my head!

Jamesís narration really shone in this chapter. He had the right amount of humour and seriousness to balance the content really well. Heís quite an observer which is something I always enjoy in characters because even though they have less interaction with people I often get a better sense of them. Iím curious to see what the rest of his school year think of him though, heís just a perplexing person it would be nice to have an insight.

For some reason I just assumed that James and Harry wouldnít get along so I was pleasantly surprised to hear him want to say he wanted to talk to his dad and then him following up with that was even better. I really liked that he was working with Teddy too as it reminded me of the whole godfather link which is often forgotten. Plus he works in the Magical Mortuary which is cool in a morbid way.

The mystery behind Baranbus Cuffe was really interesting and I canít wait to learn more about his potential downfall. Crazy theory no. 1 Ė he has staged this all to bring back fame to himself post-death so that his image wonít be tarnished any longer.

A great chapter! ♡

-Kiana

Author's Response: I'm still laughing at your greeting. ♥ And I'm so sorry for how long it's taken me to respond to this review! Time slipped away from me, but I'm going to try to never leave it so long again.

For a story so dark in nature (and it'll only get darker), I think it's important to slip in funny moments where I can find the space. I'm glad you liked that line! :) James is a good mix of humor and serious, I think, like you said, and honestly I think (without being conceited) that that comes largely from me. I'm a VERY serious person, almost too serious, but I also like to think I'm funny. I could be wrong, of course, but there you go! I'm also a huge observer and it's only hitting me now just how like his author James is. :P

I do get the impression, somehow, that James and Harry would get along. I think all the Potter kids would get along generally well with their parents -- I know people like to sensationalize it sometimes, but they're pretty average parents apart from the fame thing. And Teddy and the Magical Mortuary! Honestly one of my favorite elements of this chapter.

Ooh, interesting theory! I like it! :D Thank you for reviewing, Kiana, you lovely soul. Even though it's taken me eons to respond, I really am so grateful for it!


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