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Review:TenthWeasley says:
I've returned for chapter 2! And please forgive any typos or strangeness in advance -- I'm writing this review on my phone, and it's often liable to make things wonky.

I'm very pleased that someone's taking the time to explore post-Hogwarts Ginny issues! Which is so weird to say, but like I said in my first review, it's combining two of my favorite fic things (post-Hogwarts and mental illness) very well. I like your trio characterizations so far, too. I'm not sure if it's intentional, but everything about them seems softer and quieter and more delicate. I imagine the stresses of living through a war, especially at their young age, and with their stresses, might make them like that. I liked the brief mentions of Luna and Rolf, too!

I'm very anxious to get into the darker and more twisty parts of this story. :) I have a feeling Ginny will keep her therapy appointment, but that things won't go as planned, or that the nightmares will still persist. I want to see more of them! And more how it's affecting her real life in tangible ways, like her thinking she saw Tom in the supermarket.

A very good second chapter! I'm glad I had the time today to sit down and read it. Keep up the good work and I'll look out for chapter 3 when it arrives!

Author's Response: Hi Rachel!

Ginny is so sadly underused, and the more time I spend with her the more I've grown to like her and find her interesting. I did intend for her and the trio to come across as being a bit more subdued, which is a reflection of the trauma they've been through and their quiet struggle to settle into their adult lives having totally lost any chance at a normal childhood.

The therapy appointment will feature in the next chapter, which is going up today :) You'll have to keep your eyes peeled to see how Ginny's nightmares manifest themselves in new and (hopefully) frightening ways!

Thanks so much for your fabulous review!

-Amanda


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