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Review:Haronione says:
Hi TenthWeasley!

I loved this chapter as much as the last one! As usual, this was written brilliantly and I loved your descriptions here :)

Again, I loved the characterisation. I loved that you had James being a bit squeamish and put off his dinner when made to think about the body. Also, I loved that Albus found this amusing and teased him by asking if he was squeamish. Usually in next-gen stories it is the other way round and I love that you've flipped the characterisation in this :)

I really liked James's line about Erin meeting Hermione! She really does seem Hermione-ish, but without her being just a little clone of her. Great characterisation!

So, you have got me hooked. Before the first mystery is solved you have left us with another one! I am intriqued as to why the name of the dead man did not show up on the map, no wonder it freaked James out! And then the curtains bursting into flames! Gah, Spooky! I am left wondering if the 2 incidents are related, and if so - how, why, who? I am guessing they are but I am not making any other predictions - I'm never very good at that!

I will most definitely be back soon for chapter three :D

Haronione ♥

Author's Response: I'm pleased to hear you liked it! ♥ I think a lot of my next gen characterization comes from the fact that I HAVEN'T read or written a lot of this era, so I just write them how I see them -- which apparently isn't like other people do. ;) I'm so glad Erin doesn't feel like a Hermione-clone to you, too. She is a bit like her, but also her own person, you know?

I won't give you any indication if the incidents are related or not. That's part of the fun! Reading over these reviews has made me very excited to start writing this story again, and I think I'm going to try and finish chapter 5 this week so I can post chapter 4 very soon. I told myself I'd take it easier with this story, but it still makes me twitchy to be such a sporadic updater.

Thank you for reviewing -- I'd love to see you return to future chapters, too!


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