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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Wait.

What?! She can't.. she can't die? This chapter was so thrilling and just all around amazing.

God, you're killing me. Astoria... she reminds me way too much of myself and it's very relatable. I love the way you give her this amazing personality. She's still a girl and has those super girly feelings and stuff, but she's also very Gryffindor like in her stubbornness.

I think the "Mudblood" part was very cold. I'm just so disappointed in Draco for saying that.. It reminded me a lot of Snape's outburst at Lily that resulted in their friendship being over - and it killed my heart because I know Draco's just like Snape - he doesn't mean it.

Hermione was done so well, along with Ron also. Hermione was kind but with her usual flair and wittiness while Ron was just being a tad bit insufferable, but in this scenario it worked.

This "date" was definitely not like how I had pictured it LOL. It's definitely going to be tough for them.

I found Draco's jeers and taunts to Ron so funny, and Ron's responses even funnier. Then it got real and all serious and I was like, "Whoa." You did a great job with things escalating like that. Your descriptions were flawless as always.

Draco standing up for Astoria was just so.. Adorable and gah. So cute. I was torn between that whole scene - am I supposed to be fangirling at the cuteness or scared witless because OMG AVADA KEDAVRA.

Ah :') Anyway, I'll be back tomorrow hopefully (if I'm not like drowning in homework, y'know) and great work as always :)

Nadia

Author's Response: Hi, Nadia!

Take a deep breath. Nobody's dead, at least not yet.

I'm really pleased that you like Astoria and find her easy to relate to. I feel like I walk a fine line with her sometimes because I don't want to lose sight of the fact that she is only 16, but she's definitely a very mature 16. She might hex you for calling her "Gryffindor like". ;)

Draco was disappointed in himself for uttering that word. Of all the emotions that Draco still struggles with after the war, anger is the one that's going to get him into trouble again and again in this story. Much more to come...

I'm glad you liked Hermione. I was also a little worried about her, especially how quickly she makes the leap from being the peacemaker to being the aggressor. But she does have a temper, so I reckoned it would work.

This was definitely not what either Draco or Astoria had in mind for their first date. You'll find out a lot more about the people who were attacking Draco in the next chapter. There was fault to go around in that situation. But he was more than willing to put his life on the line to keep her safe.

I hope you get a chance to come back soon. If you like cute Draco-Astoria moments, I think you'll enjoy the next chapter.

Thanks!
-Dan


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