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Review:patronus_charm says:
Val! ♥

Your use of present tense really adds to the story. It never really stood out to me before until this chapter but it just gives it a really twist especially as itís a historical story as it feels as if historyís actively happening if that makes sense. It probably doesnít but I thought I would share it with you anyway.

I adored Astridís section! ♥ It just had this wonderful air of simplicity about it with the descriptions of Paris and her thoughts about it and set a really beautiful scene. Astrid just felt so at home there with her absent mindedly passing the Eiffel tower whereas to me I would be running around screaming and whatnot and that gave it an authentic air.

The way you showed how Nazis could be sort of humane with the scene with Maximilian was really interesting. I always find WWII stories which show that side more authentic as there must have been some who had a vague idea of morals and ethics. I have a feeling he might shape Astridís life so Iíll be on the lookout for him.

Gah, another piece of fantastic historical accuracy! The way you described all the ersatz-style food was just great. It really showed how they all were wearing down like the food was and that small section with Simon was really poignant about showing the other effects of war. AH! Everything is so sad I canít handle it!

Camille and Xavier were just ♥ ♡ ♥ So many unsaid things but so perfect things they were. Iím still divided over whether Camille and Astrid are my favourite characters though. Camille has this love torn though conflict going on and she just has this sense of warmness about her which draws me in. As for Astrid, sheís the braver and more girl power one for venturing off into Nazi territory on her own but thereís still this slight remoteness about her. Hmm, Iíll have to read on and wait.

Sarah and Simon were just great! Their dialogue was brilliant, their emotions and reactions were brilliant and so was their eventual escape. Everything seems to be good right now, so something must be coming along to destroy it. Iíll be watching you Val :P Great chapter though!

-Kiana

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