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Review:Ardeith says:
I feel really bad, I've been gone from this site and your lovely story for so long! Let's see...I've been busy with work, a very bad thing happened but it led to some good (I think), I moved and here I am again. I'm going to read all the chapters till the end and review, too, in hopes of making it up to you!

One thing I like about this story is how you are able to keep in the moment and the reader forgets what is to come. I liked how Alice wanted to go on missions and I was pulling for her to get to go, but then I remembered what a terrible fate is in store for Alice and Frank. Hope that makes sense!

Now I've been away from this story for a long time, but when I heard Death Eaters talking about "Bridger" it make me worry for Beth...even if one of them might have been Severus.

Author's Response: I don't generally respond to reviews out of order, but it's SO good to see you back again! ♥ I get so worried about Internet friends, because you'll basically never know if something bad happens to them, right? I'm glad to see you're okay! You don't need to make anything up to me. :) It really is a relief to see you're all right, and I hope things continue to get better for you!

Your second paragraph makes perfect sense. ;) And that's actually something I was going for -- the characters don't know what the readers know, but I want to keep the readers in suspense anyway. I'm also notoriously cruel and like throwing little barbs at people to pain their hearts, but that's neither here nor there.

Ah, Beth's name. Or is it? (I'm terrible at being vague.) Thank you so much for this review! This really made my entire day. I hope to hear more from you very soon, too!


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