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Review:800 words of heaven says:
REVIEW TAG!

Am I sporadic reviewer, or what? all that aside, I do love me a good Draco/Astoria fic, so I couldn't resist.

Astoria in her Hogwarts days made me feel so uncomfortable, but in the best of ways. Actually, even later on, whenever she talks about her feelings for Draco makes me feel uncomfortable. Don't get me wrong though - it's a great feeling, and I'll tell you why. She makes me so uncomfortable because she's so open and accepting of her emotions. She never shies away from what she's feeling, and doesn't simply acknowledge them, but embraces them, which I think is really fascinating.

I thin my favourite part of this story was when you described the Battle of Hogwarts. It was really interesting and emotionally involving for me, even though she didn't partake in the actual battle. I liked how it showed a different side to the war, and really illustrated how much like the Rebel Alliance Harry, the gang, and the Order were.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this story! I'd like to see where it leads. :)

Author's Response: HI :D So good to see you here again :P

I LOVE the way you put that. It's one of the best ways to describe what Astoria feels and it's one of the best things I could have heard about her. Writing Draco/Astoria isn't easy, but I'm giving it a go, and I LOVED how you worded that bit about her. It's perfect. Thanks :')

It is, isn't it? We've read a lot about both parties- the good and the bad. But what about those in between? And such big things always leave an impact on everyone. it's just upto us, how we deal with it. I'm glad you liked my portrayal of Astoria and found her choices interesting.

This review made my day! :) Stay tuned. I'll post chapter 2 soon. Thanks :)


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