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Review:MC_HK says:
I am literally crying right now. Like, not even joking in the least. This was such a touching chapter, and oh.. I wish I had someone like Bill. I'll adopt him as my big brother! :')

Anyways, you do what you always do, which is write emotions fantastically. I'm just floored by how you write the scene where Sadie is surrounded by all those people. As I have social anxiety myself (obviously not to this degree, but let's roll with it), I can understand what it's like to have all that loud noise and crowds of people around it. It's not fun at all, and I think you captured that very well. Then the conversation with Bill and Sadie and the way Bill cared, it's just.. I'm tearing up thinking about it again. It was amazing. Since Bill isn't a character too often written about, I'm so happy with the personality you gave him. You wrote him perfectly for this part of "adopted big brother", and I just can't wait to read more of him.

Hmm, as for CC, there isn't much except that you have some words in there that are missing letters, but other than that, it's flawless. I LOVE THIS STORY. And I do hope you feel better soon :)

--Monica

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're crying, but this review really did make my day. I'm so excited that my story is managing to touch people somehow. I never imagined that when I started posting. I hoped people would like it and connect to Sadie somehow, but never thought they would as much as they have.

Hey, I don't have a big brother either, but I found an adopted one through fanfic, so don't ever count anything out! LOL.

And I'm so glad you liked the chapter.

Aw...thanks. I guess all my stories do kind of end up being emotional messes, don't they. LOL.

That scene with Sadie actually was rooted in a little bit of personal experience. Not so much social anxiety for me. As long as I don't have to SAY anything in front of the crowd, crowds in and of themselves don't usually bother me, but there are things that really, really scare me. Once, when I was little, I reacted to such a scene in pretty much the same way Sadie just did, grabbing onto the coat of the person in front of me and burying my face in it until we were out.

I'm glad you liked Bill. I haven't written him as much so it was hard to get his voice right. But I did so want Sadie to have someone notice her distress.

I'm sorry for the down time between new updates, but I really do hope that this break will be good for me and allow me to get my life organized and back in order. Then writing will be so much more fun!

Thanks for the wonderful review!


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