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Review:toomanycurls says:

I really, really love how you portrayed Lily and Petunia as sisters. They seemed at least a bit close at first in your story. I always imagined that they'd be friends (considering how nice Lily has always been portrayed). It was a bit heartbreaking to think of them going from sister/friends to what we see out of Petunia in the books. :(

I thought the tension between the sisters was well done. I can imagine it was hard for Petunia to feel left out when Lily discovered her magic. Mr. and Mrs. Evans were wonderfully supportive and loving. That made me feel all sorts of happy for Lily. I could really see how she grew up centered in love and acceptance.

Lily's manifestations of magical ability were really cute. I like the theme (which follows the books) of having kids do magic under emotionally charged situations which it seemed Lily did as well.

I'm really quite curious to read more! I'll add this to my list of things to read.


Author's Response: Hello Rose :) Thank you for the lovely review!

I am so glad you loved the portrayal of Lily and Petunia! I see them as being good friends when they were younger and that magic came between them. I wish I could write a reunion between the two, but we all know that never happened :( Maybe they would have had a reconciliation if Lily hadn't died so prematurely? Maybe Lily's death made Petunia even more anti-magic and turned her into the Petunia we know in the books? That's what I like to think anyway!!

I agree that it would have been hard for Petunia when Lily discovered her magic, and I'm glad you liked Lily's early manifestations of magic. It is good to hear that you thought I wrote the tension between them well :)

I am really happy you are adding this to your list of things to read :) thankyou!

Thanks again for the great review!

Haronione ♥

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