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Review:MissMdsty says:
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First thing's first, you are the first happy recipient of a post-exam review :) Second, this is the first review I've left on the new layout. Isn't this your lucky day?

I really liked the way you incorporated the flashbacks and the periods in which the characters were lost in their own thoughts in the whole of this chapter. It's actually something I appreciate about your writing style, the way in which you incorporate these smaller story arches (like the Camille/Xavier romance) into the main story, which is of course the war and it's impact on the lives of those caught in its path.

I absolutely adored the descriptions with Camille and Xavier in this chapter. It creates such a comfortable and safe environment around the pair and your words were so spot on it made my heart ache for Camille. This, in particular, struck me as something you might read in one of those classic, epic, timeless love stories: "But she'd loved him viscerally, entirely, so badly it had hurt sometimes just to look at him, as if her heart was about to burst out of her chest."

That is just perfection in words. And that ending. Okay, I am super curious what's going to happen so I'm ending my review here and going to see what happens next!

Lovely chapter my dear! As always, great work!

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