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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is brilliant! I really enjoyed reading it, and it was so funny! I loved the characters of Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley, they had such witty and relatable personalities, and you put them in hilarious and random situations.

I loved the dialogue at the beginning! Especially the way Rose coughs 'moobs' I couldn;t stop laughing at that. I especially loved the extra bits of detail you add through out this on shot, such as 'taking full advantage of the corridor being empty' and 'Im Rowena Ravenclaw, the founder of Ravenclaw, the most Rowena of the Rowenest, the most Rav of the Rav, the most Claw of the Claw "', they were all so funny and it was a spot of genius to make these prompts all connected in some way. That was another ting - how they were all connected, and the way one event linked to another fluently and smoothly. I liked the way you knew Scorpius was going to die anyway, so it wasn't as sad. The fat and spotty jokes through out were very humorous as well, especially the way you kept bringing them up! :) It was extrememly random,and the pace was fast, but not so that you got lost. And as for the originality...10/10!

Overall, a really entertaining and memorable one shot, with really inventive plot twists and turns that kept me gripped to the screen until the very end. Awesome!

Sophie :D

Author's Response: Hello, Sophie! :D I am so excited to see you here!

Aha, I know you've seen the prompts we had to use for this so you know how hard it was to come up with a plot without making it too random and giving your characters fun personalities..

Sometimes I still think that I went crazy haha.

MOOBS! ♥ I think they are needed in any parody. Just saying. I added bits of detail in there, because I feel like the dialogue was so overwhelming. Descriptions always painful for me so I felt like I should at least add **something** to make it a bit more visual.

Yeah.. that whole Rowena Ravenclaw thing.. I really don't know how that happened..

I find it hilarious that you enjoyed the "flow" of this piece lol.

All credit for originality goes to Jenny and Claire for the prompts! I just made the literal usages of them haha.

Thanks so much for your kind words m'dear!

Nadia :D

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