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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Sorry this is so late! I'm makin' my way through this slowly, but I promise I'll finish! It's a lovely story to look forward to, so I'll definitely be back for the remaining chapter, have no fear.

I'm just going to comment on your word choice again (again!) because it's really, really great. There are sentences here that just sing. Like this, for example: "Her copper reduced to coal." You've already given the reader a clear image of her red hair being singed, but this added bonus of a sentence really brings the whole image alive. I LOVE it.

Also I really adore Charlotte's dialogue. She's very giddy and full of life and even though I don't know everything about her, her speech is really illuminating in terms of her character.

And where's Scorpius?! All of this is really great and the pacing (again again again with the pacing...) is fantastic, and everything is developing really well. I can't wait to figure out what's up with him, and where he ended up after all of this.

On to the next! Great chapter.

xx Rin

Author's Response: Hey Rin! Don't worry about it at all, it was surprising that I managed to get through yours so quickly so don't worry about it, as I fully understand!

I'm so glad that you liked it! I seem to have a theme of relating her theme to fire now that you keep on pointing those lines out :P Oh well, I'll keep up with it.

I really love Charlotte too! I don't know why, but I guess she's just the sort of person most people want to be.

With Scorpius, you'll find out more in the next chapter! Thank you so much for these wonderful compliments, they really have made my day! ♡

-Kiana


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