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Review:StellaRose says:
Hey there! Just wanted to let you know that I'm LOVING your story! I think you have a great idea going on and I can't wait to find out what happens!

OMG I can't wait to read about her interactions with Albus. I think that James likes her too. Or does he? Still debating on that. Right now I think it could go either way. Maybe he's trying to set her up with his brother? Gah. I can't decide :)

The only cc I have is that you need to be careful about stereotyping your characters. Clark's for example, is kind of annoying in the first couple of chapters because even though she's not a very nice person, she's drop dead gorgeous, super smart and extremely athletic. It just doesn't seem very realistic. That's just my two cents though. I do really like your story, that characterization is the only one I'm not completely sold on.

I'll definitely be checking back to read your next chapters. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

--Emmy

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the tip :) I'll keep that in mind when I'm writing her character!

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