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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
OH. My. Gracious!!!

So, I've been a silent reader for a bit--sorry! I just got rather addicted, but I've every intention of going back and leaving proper reviews. I'm really enjoying this story. You're writing flows flawlessly. It's been a long time since I ran across an author that was new to me who was of your writing caliber. Brava!

And so, I just HAD to stop and applaud you on that incredible reveal. I was like, "But wait--" and yet, every single thing I could think of that you've written about Lily could be explained by her being a Squib at Muggle school. How hard for her, to be the daughter of Harry Potter and a Squib! But she pulls everything off so flawlessly, it just makes me like her all the more. Speaking of which, love that you give real depth to your secondary characters. I think Lily may well be my favorite, though I'm fond of all of them. Wow, I'm still reeling. That was excellent. Please accept my virtual round of applause. Can't wait to read forward!

--Penny

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for all the reviews! :)

I wanted the Lily sub-plot to come totally out of the blue. There are clues, but they're the kind of clues that only become apparent on a second reading - or at least, they're apparent, but not for what they are. That was my plan, at any rate! It seems to have paid off though, and so I get immense pleasure and satisfaction at this type of review. Lily is probably one of my favourite characters too - James HAS to come first, of course, and I have a soft spot for Harry and Louis, but I also love Lily. Although a lot of that is probably down to Maddie, who steals every scene she's in. Thanks again for your review!


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