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Review:Dawn says:
That was beautiful! I love your writing style and the premise of this story.

It's really unique as compared to most fanfiction in which the next gen is portrayed as one big happy family with no problems whatsoever. The fact that orphans are not liked and that a huge end-of-magic-forever-and-ever day is coming seems like such a gritty and real dystopian future. And the fact that it starts at the end of the story with her as an old woman and that it will kind of come full circle is a great touch too.

Rose caring for brother and bringing back the dead... wow. And the Head makes me feel icky inside because the way he speaks about Rose, it's like she's his slave or something. Ugh.

Overall, this seems like a very intriguing and addicting start to a story! Onto the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I spent a long time formulating the plot for this story so I'm really excited about it. I personally love writing the Head--he's so unabashedly amoral haha. He's going to have a very interesting time with Rose. And yes, since we know how the end turns out, it's just a matter of getting there. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you like Albus next chapter!

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