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Review:randomwriter says:
Hi there Lauren :P Was just re-reading this (second time today!) And saw that I can leave the review now. So here goes. I'm posting it again from my proper account. Hope you like it!


Lauren! :)

I'm FINALLY here. And now I can't believe it took me so long to get here. It's ridiculous, actually because this little one-shot is wonderful. I really liked the way you've written James and Lily. It was so cute in a somewhat awkward way. The line that plays in James' mind after Lily makes a comment on him being masochistic is genius. It made me smile as did all of his other dialogues. Lily wasn't having an entirely tactful conversation with him, but it was really nice to see how he couldn't be mad at her and how his heart just kept melting. I love James, honestly.

The Quidditch match was really nice to read. I haven't read many match scenes and I know they can be hard to do, but you did really well. It wasn;t hard to follow at all! I quite enjoyed it.

When they were having their conversation, I kept willing Lily in me head, hoping that she would tell him that she has feelings for him, but then Madam Pomfrey walked in and I was like, 'Awwwh. NO. Go back. Just go back and let them finish their moment.' :P

I went back to the story page and checked its status and was really disheartened to see that it was marked 'Completed'. I REALLY want to read about the party and what happens. Do consider writing a sequel. I think it will be amazing! :)

Overall, this was really cute and it was written really well :) I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep on being awesome!

Love
Adi :)

Author's Response: Hey Adi!

Oh you lovely girl, leaving me this review and doing it twice when the archives were on the blink! Thank you! I'm so so so sorry for the appalling amount of time it has taken for me to respond to this amazing review. Please accept some cookies!

I honestly don't know how to respond. James is so much fun to write and I love that you love him! This is the James I like to read and so this is how I like to try and write him.

Gah thank you! Quidditch is really hard to write! I nearly didn't write this one-shot because of the Quidditch so to know it was enjoyable and easy to follow is relieving.

Hehe I couldn't let James and Lily have it too easy! Pesky Madam Pomfrey ruins there moment!

Um... You're not the fist to mention a sequel. I may consider it one day but at the minute I've got other things to complete. It's not off the cards though!

Thank you so much for a lovely review my dear, you're too sweet! I really appreciate it!

Lauren :)


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