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Review:800 words of heaven says:

Ah! It's been simply ages since I read a Jily fic! And I was just thinking about finding myself one earlier today. I'm really happy that I found this!

The premise seems a little cliche at the moment, but I love me a good cliche, and I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this story. I'm hoping it covers more than just the following week in the lives of Lily and James!

I'm looking forward to seeing how you're going to develop Lily. If this does continue on into their seventh year, then I think it'll be very interesting to see how she changes as a character. Starting at the end of their sixth year, instead of the beginning of their seventh is a little different, and I'm excited to see what you'll make of it.

Your dialogue was wonderful to read! I learnt a lot about the characters and their relationships with each other. It really set the scene for them and the story, too, and what more could you ask of a first chapter?

Looking forward to seeing where this will lead! I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Hi 800 words of heaven! Thank you for the great review :)

I'm really pleased that you are happy you found this story! Haha, yes it does seem a bit cliche at the moment, but I hope you think it becomes less cliche as it continues!

At the moment I have no plans to carry it on into seventh year, I already have plans for their 7th year for my Marauder novel that starts in their 1st year! This is planned to be a short-story for a challenge (and I needed to get a bit of Marauder romance out of my system - you can't really write romance for 11 year olds ;)) But who knows, my plans always seem to change while writing ;)

It is so good to hear that you found the dialogue wonderful to read :) especially as I felt this was quite a dialogue heavy chapter.

Thankyou again for the lovely review! I am hoping to update soon :)

Haronione ♥

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