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Review:Haronione says:
Hi Courtney :) review tag!

So, I absolutely loved your Regulus House Cup one-shot so I was excited to see you had started a novel based on Regulus. And I was not disappointed! This was fantastic :D

I loved how this seemed to continue on from your one-shot and I am excited to read more, you write Regulus so well!! I love that you have made him still have small niggly doubts about joining the Death Eaters, after all he is still very young and it reminds me of how Draco may have felt in HBP, despite his bravado about joining. I really liked that he is not totally evil, the fact that the initiation involving the muggle girl plays on his mind so much shows this. I thought this little scene was great, it shows us that Regulus isn't really ready to join them (which I think he wasn't because, after all, he does betray Voldemort in the end!)

As you can probably tell, I loved the characterisation of Regulus. I thought the other characters were portrayed really well too; I could imagine Narcissa not really getting involved and Bellatrix being just as evil to Regulus despite him being her cousin and wanting to join the cause.

Your descriptions and little details in here are great! You set the scene well and I was really drawn into the story. You really have a lovely writing style :)

I did notice a couple of typos but nothing that a beta wouldn't pick up, and I saw on the forums that you are looking for one so I won't list them here. I saw no other errors in this though :)

Overall, this was a great first chapter and I really enjoyed it :) I will definitely be checking back for future chapters! Great job!

Haronione ♥

Author's Response: Hi there!

Ooh, you read my Regulus one-shot? This was definitely inspired and partly based on that one-shot, so I'm glad you didn't see to find it too boring! I was considering just turning that one-shot into a novel, but realized there were many things I had to add into this one that would flow into the rest of the story. If that makes any sense at all, haha.

Anyway, I'm really glad you liked this chapter and the portrayal of my characters. Thank you so much!


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