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Review:patronus_charm says:

Seeing Sirius in Azkaban seriously (no pun intended) brought tears to my eyes. I was just yelling I believe in you and the fact that my case and his was both hopeless was so sad and made me beginning blubbering. The air of Azkaban you caught was perfect, and Iím just so glad that we returned to him as it was so fitting to see that their stories wrap up well even if his one is a very sad one.

SARAH WRIGHT. I have a loved every single one of her random appearances mainly due to unpredictability and how theyíre just right and this one couldnít be more perfect. It was just like the light which gave him hope and fitted in really well with canon about how he managed to stay sane as she would have kept him like that.

YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL ABOUT HOW THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER NOW. OK? LOL. This review is turning into an explosion at the caps lock factory but I canít help it! Gah, I donít want this to be my last review. I guess I can go and re-read the series and review the chapters I havenít yet. Hmm, that idea is very tempting.

THEYíRE SO CUTE. They need to have babies, like now. Or in a one-shot about them having babies. They would be really cute ones so no need to worry about that. Gah, Iím so glad that you chose Christmas as itís all romantic and sweet but so feelsy and made me want to cry a lot which wasnít much of a surprise as this chapter has set me off a lot.

REMUS. WHY DIDNíT YOU GET YOUR ACT TOGETHER? Is he a wizard or a ghost (terrible attempt at changing it.)? Iím glad that Beth tried at least, but she needs to get her act together and visit Sirius whatís with all this she might ever not, she needs to. I can see lots of spin-off one-shot opportunities here Rachel. Hint, hint, wink, wink, nudges arm. ;)

The flashback was just perfect. Then Severus kissing her. Gah, I canít cope with it. Iíve just experienced Beth life her innocent young age to adulthood and even though Iíve only followed this story since February which isnít that long compared to some people Iíve loved every second of it and every second of their journey. Itís just been perfect and thank you so much for writing this!!! ♥ ♥ ♥


p.s. I've waited five minutes to post this review to see if the feels would have gone but they haven't :(

Author's Response: Virtual hugs! ♥ I know I'm late responding to this -- but the end is here! It's taken me two weeks to respond to these reviews because I just could not handle it sooner. It's still too weird for words not to have anything to post on Sundays.

All of the Marauders except Beth -- Sirius and Remus most prominently in this chapter -- got rough endings to their stories, and it just sucks so much. But it's also very important to Harry's story, which is one I want virtually unchanged, that I couldn't bring myself to change the vital parts. Sarah Wright is to give real-life Sarah happiness. ♥ As much as she can glean, anyway! I was so happy to include her one last time. :)

I make no sequel promises, but I won't say a flat-out never! When I know something, you'll know something. And for anyone else possibly reading this response, you'll be pleased to know (I'm already excited about typing this!) that yes, Beth and Severus have children. I have known about their children for quite some time. *squee*

A final Marauders flashback, and a final Sneth kiss -- and now I remember WHY IT'S SO HARD TO RESPOND TO THESE REVIEWS. I have so many feelings now. ♥ Cannot handle this. Thank you for being such an incredible and enthusiastic reviewer, and for being a great source of encouragement, and for loads of other things as well, Kiana. I'm proud to call you a friend!

And thank you for reading this trilogy, too!!

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