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Review:toomanycurls says:
This is a great first chapter. It's engaging and descriptive to make me want to read on further. I was a bit caught up on who the character is but you revealed her name at least towards the end. I did guess it was the OC's POV for this chapter just by the context so it's probably not necessary to spell out all the details here.

It's really interesting to tell about someone who was being held at Malfoy Manor. I

You did a great job describing how bleak her circumstances are as a prisoner. I really liked that you gave a lot of detail about your OC in a peripheral way - e.g. that she goes/went to Hogwarts, knows Draco (and that he goes home every holiday). That went a long ways in establishing a background for me. Also, I love that she's still defiant after being held hostage for so long. I think it'd be easy to lose hope but she's held on to enough to still hiss at the guys when they wake her. ^_^ Sounds like a strong person.

I was glad to see Draco's conflict at having someone he knows being held captive (and mistreated) at his home. We saw this in the books but it's nice to see how it could have built into him not wanting to cause more harm to his classmates and make him doubt his allegiances.

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you liked the way I laid out Imogen's backstory and just the general backstory for the chapter (Atleast I hope I did) haha. Also, it's such a relief to hear of your opinions on draco's character. He is by far one of the most complex people to write about. Devolping OC's is much more easier as you have more of a poetic license than with canon characters so hopefully I'm doing an alright job!

Thank tou so much for such a nice review, I'll get working on yours straight away! :)


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