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Review:alicia and anne says:
I must say that I loved this one shot so much! The way that you got everyone's feelings across about what happened to Lucy was brilliantly written.

I absolutely adore the way that you used Cluedo throughout your story, that was such a brilliant idea to do and it fit incredibly well with this story. I loved how you had all these different characters that would fit and their motives and where they were when the 'crime' was commited.

You had me hooked with this and I felt sorry for Lily, in all honesty I think all of them are to blame a little. I don't think there's one main person that shoudl take the blame apart from the vampire definitely.

I really wish that the family would accept Lucy as a vampire, but I guess it's easier for them to just admit that she's dead, well she is at least to some of them.

Brilliant! I loved this, you're an amazing writer.

Author's Response: Ahhh Tammi, thank you so much! It's always lovely to hear such great compliments ^.^

I'm not sure where the inspiration for including Cluedo came from, but I'm pleased that you loved it! I was worried about repetition so to hear I pulled it off well is great :D

Yeah, all of them are to blame a little, but I don't think the vampire should take all the blame because we still don't know who it is... it could have been a vampire who couldn't control his desires :( Although it also could have been a evil vampire determined to cause chaos, in which case they're entirely to blame... ;)

Yeah, I think the Weasleys will definitely be divided. I mean, even if they did accept Lucy and Hugo, there's the possibility of getting bitten/killed/turned by them, and when their cousins have babies that's just going to be much harder isn't it? Think of shark week too - it wouldn't be easy for them then? :3

And thank you so much! ♥

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