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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
AH!

Oh, Lily. I blame you, too. I blame you all. Even Hugo and everyone knows how much I love Hugo. But my Hugo is very bad, so I'm not all that surprised really. ;)

(I mean it, though - I do blame them all. I love them, but I still blame them.)

I LOVE the Cluedo parts added to it. It was so cool to see, different yet very fitting to the story. I liked who you gave each piece to - Al with the professor and Lily with Miss Scarlett.

I don't like Thad, but I wanna know more about him. And I'm not sure about Alexis, I don't think she's evil or even really knows about what's happening. Because I think something's happening, everything is connected, and it has something to do with Claudine and Valerie. I really wanna know and I can't wait for more Bite Club.

:O Lily knew Jeremiah! Well, kinda. And he was looking at Lucy. THERE'S A PLOT! I WANNA KNOW! :D

I still like Jeremiah! And I love my new OTP! ;)

Amazing story! Loved it!

Sam.

Author's Response: Oh, Lily. It was her fault in a way, for the reasons highlighted in this one-shot, but I don't like the way she's ignoring everyone else's mistakes and heaping all the blame onto herself :(

Hahahaha, thank you! I'm not sure where the Cluedo inspiration came from, but I like it too :D Some of the characters were a little different, but overall they fit so I'm pleased.

Thad is your average not-very-good boyfriend. Lily doesn't have much taste in guys :P As for your theory about everything being connected and all leading back to Claudine and Valerie... you'll just have to wait and see ;)

YES YES YES FIND THE PLOT IN FUTURE CHAPTERS OF BITE CLUB :D

Hugo/Jeremiah ftw ♥ (Well... for now.)

-Isobel


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