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Hey there!
First of all, congratulations for writing a story about an unusual couple with a different plot in an uncommon way. =] I love such kind of stories and my own stories are always like that. So cheers for that!

It looks like you have given a twist to Regulus's characterization. You've done it well, but I thought it was too soft for his image in my mind. Maybe you can try to write him like Snape? He had a soft corner for Lily, but his Death Eater side showed up often. If that helps!

Mary was really nice though. She was the Mary I always imagine. =] Great job for that!

Overall, this was very effective.
Ashwini

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked Mary. I've honestly never tried to write her before or even thought about her much before this fic so her characterisation was kind of out of the blue and I'm glad you liked it. As far as Reg goes, for some reason I've always pictured him as kind of softer than people like Snape. All the description we get of him in the books is that he got 'in over his head' with the death eaters, plus he then went on to discover Voldemort's secret and try and kill him, so I've never thought he was really evil or anything, and also he's so young in this story that I wanted to show the side of him that's really just a heartbroken little kid. Sorry you didn't quite love the characterisation, but thanks for the feedback!

~Maia :)


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