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Review:LoonyLovegood11 says:
I am loving this story. You have started it off nicely and I am looking forward to how you are going to continue on with it.

I liked the bit with the cup being knocked off the table. It gave an insight into the characters without them saying anything which personally is my favourite thing.

However I hope they don't continue to all feel so sorry for themselves throughout the whole thing. It is already quite repetitive in that sense especially towards the end of the chapter. Other than that I really enjoyed it.

Good work and keep writing xx :)

Author's Response: Yeah, unfortunately Gwynn does feel really sorry about herself, but we wanted to just give insight on her situation to set everything up for the rest of the story. Thank you for commenting on that though! It let's us know that our readers do in fact know what's going on, and we now know for sure that we can steer away from her pity party and get on with everything else! Chapter 2 is currently awaiting validation. Thank you for the great review! :)
~ Jenny

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