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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi! I'm here from the RtPAY in the Common Room :D I couldn't resist snagging you, I've been looking for a reason to read more of your work!

Usually I'm not one for Draco/Astoria, but I've been venturing into their relationship lately so this one really did catch my eye.

Right of the bat, I loved the atmosphere you painted. Your descriptions are brilliant. I loved it.

Though Draco was drunk, I loved how you managed to keep his cheekyness and really made his character come out. This line of dialogue was brilliant:

"Drunks? This is a bar, right?"

That for me was just so Draco. It was literally perfect. I knew at that moment this chapter was going to be great!

Now, moving along to Astoria. You made her - likable! I really like her character! She seems strong but sweet also - I think she's everything Draco needs.

*is losing love for Dramione by the second*

But seriously, it's quite late over here and I should be going to bed.. but oh well, next chapter I think :D

I think, the best part was the "third D". That is so clever my mind was blown. *bows down repeatedly*
So, summing things up actually, this chapter is brilliant and magnificently written. Great job! I loved it and will definitely keep on reading!

-Nadia

Author's Response: Hi, there!

I never really thought much about Draco until he and Astoria sort of made their way into my heart when I was writing Conspiracy of Blood. I've really come to like the two of them together. They compliment one another nicely in my mind: Astoria's calm, deliberative and practical nature helping to temper Draco's proud, headstrong tendencies.

I'm glad you like Draco's snippy little remarks. I've always thought those were a major part of his character, as well. No matter what he took away from the war, I can't ever see him being a nice guy. It's just not in his nature. Keeping him true to character was really important to me.

I'm really pleased that you're losing the love for Dramione. There are some things that just shouldn't be loved. ;)

I'm really, really pleased that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the lovely review!


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