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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
Glad to read another chapter. It was nice to get some Ellie-Albus interaction this time. Can’t wait for more. I love me a never-ending bantering showdown. Ellie’s ‘vocabulary’? Bahahaha!

It was good to meet more of Ellie’s friends--get introduced to the gang and all.

One thing: when it switches from the train station to the Great Hall, there’s no line or break or anything, so I was a bit confused for a minute. One second Mrs. Potter is there and the next sentence they’re at Hogwarts. But that’s a pretty small thing.

I’d really love to hear the Sorting Hat’s song! Do we get to hear it later?

I’m loving reading this. It is lighthearted and witty and hilarious. And you say my favorite largely-invisible piece of eye-candy, Regalus Black, is in the next chapter? YES!

Thanks again!

Favorite quotes:

"Chris made friends like mitochondria metabolised glucose for energy. “

"Amy says that they worked in finance, which I take to mean corporate espionage. “

So funny!

--Penny

Author's Response: OMG! You're back!

That little scene between Ellie and Albus went through three re-writes until I settled on what I have now. Those two give me such a hard time when they have to interact!

And yes - a line break is definitely needed. I forgot to add one in when I was putting the chapter in the queue, although as I was writing the chapter up, I told myself that I had to do that!

AND YES MORE REGULUS I AM SO EXCITED. It's a bit weird getting excited for your own character...


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