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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Will you kindly not try to kill me? ;)

The first ever pairing I read was Remus/Lily, so I think I'll always have a soft spot for them. But in this - in this, you made my heart ache so, so much.

I loathed Lily throughout this. Absolutely despised her. I want her to die, and I want her to die now. She is such a - a Squib. That's insulting enough I hope...

I will forever feel bad for Remus, the poor boy. It could not happen to him! I think you showed his pain beautifully in a dark and sinister way..

The way their relationship developed was heartwarming, and the way it ended was heartbreaking. It was not kind to do that lol, but good on you for being able to play with my emotions like that. I hate that I loved every word of this. It was brilliantly done and sheer beauty.

I loved the (stab) sections. They were not only piercing holes through Remus, but through me too. I was literally hurting along with him.

God I hate your version of Lily. She should die in a hole.

Yes she should don't look at me that way.

Another expertly written piece by you Kiana! :)

Author's Response: Ah, Nadia, how can I respond to this fantastic review? ♥

I'm sorry that I made your heart ache, but it's hard to avoid the angsty stuff when you pair these two together. I'm glad that you hated Lily, because I wanted you to and I had a little too much fun in attempting her to be mean to let it go to waste :P

I'm so glad that you liked how I showed Remus's pain. I tend to make him suffer a lot, but he's an angsty character so it's hard to avoid.

Gah. I just want to hug you for your comments about the relationship. THANK YOU SO MUCH. That will have to do for now as I'm just squealing away about them :P

Yay for those sections working out, I thought it might be a little too artsy putting them in, but I'm glad they worked.

I'm not looking at you in anyway, as I really agree about Lily needing to die here! Thank you for this amazing review Nadia, it really made my day :D ♥

-Kiana


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