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Review:toomanycurls says:
I've always been a fan of Remus/Lily (not just because of Remus but because he seems more her type like from a hobbies and personality perspective). I liked the style you used in this story. The brief descriptions and sequences worked well to make a good narrative.

I really loved their first kiss - it was sweet and felt quite innocent.

This kind of made me hate Lily for playing Remus. I get the difficult situation she was in liking two guys, but it was sad to see her break his heart like that.

The ending in the library was brilliant. I completely related to the (stabs) as they happened. It would be good to have a (stab and twist). ^_^ Well, maybe I'd just find that amusing. I could relate to that situation of someone trying to be consoling but their words just hurting more and more.

I really enjoyed the use of present tense in this story. The story is a little more description-light than I'd usually want to see but I think the story works pretty well without more.

-Rose

Author's Response: Rose!

I've always had a soft spot for them too, because I agree, when you think about Remus is suited to her a lot more than James in many ways.

I'm glad that you liked the first kiss, as I hate writing them! I wanted you to hate Lily, so don't worry about it! It was fun to explore the more evil side of her.

I'm glad that you could relate to them, because they've happened to me a lot too! I just wanted to yell at Lily in that part that what she was saying was just making it worse.

I'm glad that you liked the different style, it was a lot of fun! Thanks for this fabulous review. ♥

-Kiana


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