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Review:AlexFan says:
Hey there! I'm back again! Sorry for taking so long but I've been terribly busy.

Anyway, I like the characterization of McGonagall. You had the smart, stern side of her but you also had the sassy, friendly side of her. I could just imagine McGonagall sitting in her office reading being annoyed that she was interrupted.

You can really tell the difference between her and Ophelia in the way that they speak but at the same time you can see that they're close friends. I imagine that Minerva McGonagall is relaxed and friendly around very few people.

I like how you didn't get rid of the fact that Sadie doesn't trust people after everything that she's been through. It sounds obvious that it would be something that would stick around but I've read many stories in which something like this was just forgotten and the character became the life of the party.

I'm definitely interested to see what's going on and what happened to Sadie's parents and why she's so important. You're definitely doing an awesome job of making your readers want to read more.

Awesome job on the chapter!
~Grace

Author's Response: Hi Grace!

I'm so sorry I'm slow responding to your great review. Got jumped by real life lately. Guess we are even then. LOL.

Thank you! I tried very hard to keep McGonagall in character. She's such a distinct personality - I didn't want to ruin it.

Ophelia was a fun character to create, and it was really fun to think of how these two very different women could have become and stayed friends.

As for Sadie not turning into the life of the party, that is one of my pet peeves of fanfiction - the instant recovery. So I am trying very, very hard to avoid that pitfall. I think Sadie has been damaged pretty deeply, so it will take time and a lot of care to fix that - that's part of what this whole story revolves around. I hope you'll continue to like it.

Glad you are excited to find out more! There will be more and more clues about Sadie's past dropped as the chapters go.

Thanks so much for a wonderful review!
-Farmgirl


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