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Review:academica says:
Hello, here for our review swap! I want to mention that it was a little tough for me to choose a story, because you've got several that look really good. I wound up going with this one because it looked like it could use the review love, but I'll hopefully be back to read more soon :)

I really like how realistic Molly's struggles were in this piece. I've definitely been there when a kid is doing something totally awful but really cute and you honestly have to figure out the appropriate reaction. I also liked how you could see that she had adapted to her busy life by finding quick ways to get ready.

The only thing that seemed a little off to me was how often you used her name. I think the story would flow a little bit if you used "she" a bit more and tried to restrict the use of "Molly."

Good work, and thanks for the swap!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi Amanda!! Wow, your review really, well,wow. ^_^ One, it thrilled me to no end to hear that more than one story looked interesting. I hope that if you get a chance to read some of my others that they live up to that impression.

I'm really glad Molly's struggles were realistic. I'm not a mom so most of it was a reach (or felt like a reach). My mom used to take pictures *then* yell at us. I don't remember that specifically but our family album is full of pictures of us kids doing something we're not supposed to do.

I'll definitely look at how often I use Molly compared to a she or her.

Thank you so much for a wonderful and uplifting review!!
-Rose


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