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Review:800 words of heaven says:

Ah! How long has it been since I read this story! Too long! I am seriously enjoying myself a lot! It was a little expository in places, but that's not necessarily a bad thing, considering that you're in it for the long haul. It makes complete sense to invest words and taking your time with introductions and character development.

I am really loving the dialogue in this. It's very organic, which is difficult to achieve at times. I do wish there was a little more description, just to create the scene a little better.

Amazing job, as always!

Author's Response: Hi again! :D Funny thing is that I just saw this. I don't know it must have slipped by my notice. But I just saw this after leaving you a review :P

I'm glad you're enjoying it :) And yes, I wanted to give some background info on Luke here because, as you've pointed out here, I'm planning to write a novel with this one, for which I have to make sure that I've introduced the characters well enough :)

I am planning to edit this story. i have four chapters up and my writing style, I'd like to think, has evolved. So I'll make sure to add in some more description when I edit :) I'm glad you liked the dialogue.

Thank you :)

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