|Review:||Poisoned Lily says:|
Oh my god. I read this chapter two days ago and here I am now, still thinking, oh my god.
I just- I love this story so, so much, and I love the idea of Flick and Al together, but you've now changed my mind completely. (And blown all my how Flick tells Al theories out of the water)
I could seriously go in to your story and punch Al in the face right now, that's how 'oh my god' I'm feeling.
I love Flick and Al together, but right now I'm feeling so sorry for Hattie, as Al's been with Flick behind her back. I think I'd actually rather Al stayed with Hattie (shocking since I've been a resolute Al/Hattie hater since they got together,) because she doesn't seem to have a very nice home life or many friends, while Flick's got a huge supportive family.
I also can't imagine how Al, Harry and Ginny will react when they find out it's not just one child/grandchild they'll have, but three. And Al's only 18.
Naturally, I've been theorising again, and my main thought- that came to me during a psychology lesson yesterday (your story is interrupting my learning and I don't even care :P)- is this: What if Hattie has twins and Flick tells Al but he decides to stay with Hattie and then Flick has to watch Al and Hattie together, with their twins, living the life she's probably imagined for her and her kids?
It sounds crazy, but I just thought, wouldn't that be both amazing and heart-breaking symmetry?
Oh, by the way (I should have said this at the beginning) I've been following your story since chapter 20 or so, and it's among my favourite stories on this website (and I read a lot of stories on this website) and I just love it so much. You're an excellent writer, and I always look forward to your updates :)
Please update soon, I just have to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Hello dearie :)
Two days, wow!
Haha, Al's been a bad boy hasn't he? Flick also wants to hit him as well so you're not alone.
Flick and Al all the way for me, although at one point I was routing for Al and Hattie. Hattie may be been but she is misunderstood. And like you said she doesn't have a good home life or many friends and she's always trying to get her father's attention.
Al's reaction is interesting (Well I think so at least) I must say as are Harry and Ginny's.
Theories, I love theories on how people think Flick will tell Al or what will happen next. My story interrupts my own learning sometimes so don't worry, lol :P. Ooo I really like your theory, it's really interesting and that would be a good twist as well as heart breaking for Flick.
Thank you sweetie for reading and reviewing and for sticking with Flick and me this far!