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Review:AlexFan says:
I can certainly see why Delilah did what she did, Dom's right though, she could've just fired her but that would've made Delilah unpopular with everyone because she fired someone that everyone liked. It probably wouldn't have done her any favours.

I'm glad that she got arrested though, she deserves what she gets. I still can't believe that someone would do his to someone else just to have power. It just goes to show you what people will do to be powerful though.

The only thing I noticed, and maybe I'm the only one who feels this way, is that the chapter was a little fast. It seemed like one second Dom was accusing Delilah of her crime and the next Delilah was admitting to what she did.

To me it just felt like Delilah would've denied what she did longer and attempted to make Dom doubt herself instead of giving in so quickly.

Other than the pace of the chapter being a little bit rushed, I quite enjoyed the chapter.

Author's Response: Hey again =) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Delilah is kind of twisted in that sense, yeah. She craves power and she will do anything for it.

Hmm, I didn't want to slow things down by dragging out the confrontation and stuff, I felt like it would become boring if I repeated the same thing over and over - of Delilah denying things and stuff, so I did it a bit fast. Also, Keeping in mind Dom's character, I don't think she'd doubt herself no matter what Delilah said or did. I get your point though, so thanks for the comment.

I am glad you enjoyed the chapter regardless of what came across as fast-paced to you. Thank you.


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