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Review:AlexFan says:
Holy, and I thought I had a busy life! I'm amazed that you have time to write anything at all with everything that you're doing.

I personally think that this is one of your better chapters. There was more description and stuff so I actually knew what things looked like.

Albus and Bri are the best at talking, really, they are. Except for the fact that there was basically no talking being done and stuff. I would've expected Bri to be freaking out too. In fact, Albus was the last person who I think would've freaked out in that situation. Feel a little guilty and sorry but not freak out that much. I guess even Albus Potter has his moment though.

Anyway, awesome chapter and take your time with the next one!

Author's Response: My life has been pretty hectic lately but I still try to find time for you guys and this lovely story!

Aw, thank you so much! I'll try to keep that in mind when writing future chapters.

That's nice to hear! Yes, there wasn't much talking this chapter between them. It was quiet the role reverse change to have Al being the one freaking out but I guess even Albus Potter can have his moments, as you say.

Thank you!


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