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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello there! I'm here from Puff review tag.

I have definitely never read a story quite like this - I am amazed that you managed to make the whole thing rhyme and still make sense, because I can't even imagine how hard that would be! So, really well done on that. Also looking at all the prompts and really impressed how you managed to put together all TEN of those plus rhyming! Seriously, that's way cool. And even though it isn't in iambic pentameter, I think Shakespeare would be impressed, if he lived in this century and read fanfiction. ;)

I love that you gave a voice to Susan Bones, who is a bit overlooked (and from an overlooked house to boot. But we both know that Hufflepuff is where it's at! :p ) It's wonderful to read something with a Puff protagonist. You wrote Susan really well. She is shy but fierce and determined (enough to get past a dragon!), and WAY nicer than Klyde is. :P Your Susan is so awesome.

Side note - I also really like the time period you chose to write in, its great to read about the characters we know and love, after they left Hogwarts.

Altogether this was a really enjoyable story - especially your impressive rhyming. You should be proud of this story! Great job :)

Author's Response: Howdy! ^.^

Woohoo! Love to hear that! It's always exciting when people find your work original and unique! I really appreciate it! And it was quite tricky! Haha When I posted it, to be honest, I wasn't sure I'd even done that - I thought that maybe it rhymed, but the story got lost, so it's wonderful that you could follow along still! PLUS the prompts - yeah, it was a miracle I made the deadline! LOL :-D

Mhmmm, preach it. haha I do still quite often feel that Hufflepuff and its members get overlooked and are constantly being forced to prove themselves, over and over, as if the last time they did something great was a fluke or something. So I really, really wanted Susan to represent the kindness and acceptance and tolerance found in Hufflepuff while still kicking some serious butt! I'm so glad you liked her!

I definitely agree! I love picking up where things left off; figuring out what people made of themselves, ect. Glad we agree on that! Thank you!

Ahh, you're very kind! I really appreciate this incredibly lovely review and I'm so happy you enjoyed the read! Thank you, thank you, thank you! :)


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