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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hello again!

I'm really loving Tor. I like her internal dialogue in this much better than the last, but yeah, I loved her eye roll at forgetting the red dress.

I really enjoy the scenes in which you describe her relationships with her family. Yaxley is almost likable, but then again he is still cold to them now, and a Death Eater so I'll try not to pity him.

I also very much like Taurus. I feel like I'm shipping Tor with everyone now haha :P But seriously, I think all your OCs have great personalities and are very likable.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this story takes off, it seems very good. I think your descriptions are brilliant as always and you're doing a great job with Astoria, and wield her character very nicely.

To the next chapter I go!

Also - Pyxis is a guy, and I totally read that bit on the other chapter wrong. I reread it and I was like *facepalm*. He was restraining from hitting Draco.. not something else. I thought he was a "she" the whole time. Pardon my stupidity. That was quite embarrassing.. Though I bet you totally "LOL"ed at that :P

A brilliant chapter, and I'm sorry for the confusion!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

I'm glad you're liking Tor! She can be pretty sassy internally, and writing her is a lot of fun, especially in the chapters where she gets to be more carefree. I'm pleased you're enjoying her family so far as well. Yaxley is one of my favourite characters to have put in cameos and Tor looks up to him a lot.

Taurus is such a great guy! I'm really pleased to hear you like all the OCs and are getting a feel for their personalities. I feel like I know them so well by now, so it's great to get this feedback from early on in the story.

Hahahahaha.

That's actually so funny. I went back and checked the chapter, wondering if I actually HAD specified that Pyxis was a boy and if any other readers had made the same mistake and just not told me. It was pretty funny. It would be even funnier if you saw the chapter image labelled Pyxis on this chapter and still thought he was a girl - to be fair, the singer pictured does have very pretty hair! :P

Thanks for this wonderful review! :)


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