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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
First off, I LOVED the way that you used Regulus' point of view to introduce Mary's personality: freaking fantastic! The secondary characterization was beautifully written.

Secondly, you've made me cry. Legitimate tears..well at least a few of them were.

Third of all, it's nice to see Regulus depicted at such an emotional level. He's always been one of my favorite characters, even though Rowling never went much in detail in the books with him. The fact that he was the younger brother of Sirius Black and seemingly required to live up to his parents expectations in the shadow of his "blood-traitor" brother must have been emotionally tolling on him. And then dying a wayward hero to boot.

I'm sorry, I'm getting off topic. The point being is that I love the way you've depicted Regulus Black in this story.

Lastly, I think this story is very well written in general. I love the setup, I love the structure, and I love the characters.

10/10

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Oh my god, thank you! I have to admit, Regulus is a fave of mine to write - I love minor characters to start with but exploring the Black family dynamic from someone other than Sirius' point of view is just endlessly interesting to me *U* And I'm really attached to this story in particular because I've been writing and rewriting it for ages, so I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the lovely review :D

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