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Review:Courtney Dark says:
REMUS! DON'T DO THIS TO ME!

Poor, poor, poor Beth. And poor Severus. And poor Remus, in a way (even though I kinda wanted to hit him in this chapter, and throttle him for never contacting harry) because I can see that something inside him has just switched off.

You have written everything so perfectly and, I must say, I am looking forward to these (hopefully more positive) Severus and Beth developments, because these last few chapters have been very dark indeed.

Amazing (though horribly awful) chapter.

Courtney:)

Author's Response: I don't know why I get the impression that Remus couldn't handle the events at the end of the war, more than anyone else -- but I do. I think a large part of it has to do with the fact that he basically just disappeared for 12 years with no explanation. That's the sort of thing I think would happen when someone just got too overwhelmed and couldn't cope with the emotions, you know?

There are definitely more positive Sev/Beth developments coming! I will attempt and reassure you, even though you've already read the entire book and don't need my comforting anymore. ♥ Maybe someone else is reading these responses. Who knows? Not me!

Thank you for your review!


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