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Review:Danny J Taylor says:
I really enjoy reading your work but it's starting to become more of a romance novel rather than anything else... Where's the magic and the danger and the mystery? This is part of what made the Harry potter saga so great! It would be great to get past this dark cloud of Harry and ginnys relationship difficulties and get down to some death eater hunting, when is the plot gonna kick in? Please don't tell me all these entwining relationships are the main plot because thats just ridikulas !

Author's Response: I do understand your point, and I do think that it's important to try to find a balance between romance, drama, action and adventure. I think the reason that I'm leaning towards the romance/drama part is that I find writing action really difficult. But of course, I don't want to exclude it, and if you stick with the story you will see that there will be lots of both! At some points in their life, like where you are at right now in the story, I think that romance will dominate, for example when they have major problems in their relationships. But not all Death Eaters are captured and Harry and Ron won't rest until they are! However, if strictly action/adventure is what you're looking to read, there are plenty of stories to find like that as well ;) I will keep what you have said in mind and try to add more of it in the upcoming chapters! :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

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