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Review:.......... says:
I'm going to apologize for any misspellingS (im super tired right now :p) but.
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS FANTASTIC! I mean, Albus' emotions are just fantastic with that little part of him wanting to admit having a part in the murder but instead just pushing it down. Fantastic! And oh my gosh Hogwarts is closing :'( oh darker things to come? oh gosh, this is getting intense!
yeah, i know, ive just abandoned all grammar :p
but seriously, this is one of the best written fanfictions that ive ever read (believe me, ive read a lot in my days)! If you decided to pull a 50 shades of grey *shudders* and made this into a book, i would totally buy it! keep up the great work and ill be eagerly awaiting the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Albus does have a bit of an internal conflict with his actions and there is a part of him that would like to admit his mistake and redeem himself. Unfortunately, he suppresses it quickly enough. I'm glad you picked up on it though--it is (will be) an important aspect of the story. Yes, things will be getting darker from here on out since they are out of their safe school setting.

I'm very flattered by your compliments :)

I probably won't be pulling a 50 shades of grey (ick) but if I ever do publish a real book I would love that you read it . Thanks for reviewing and come again soon!

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