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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Here to review for the Hufflepuff RTAP tag. I actually liked this first chapter and the way you've written the characters, especially as innocent first years. I like that the group of first years sitting together in the compartment were all sorted into different houses, thus splitting them up. I also like how you showed how different they grew up (from the purebloods/halfbloods whose families thrust their beliefs on them to the muggleborns like Lily who feel like they're more lost than the others). I also like the subtle way you've written Lily's distaste for James (it's always annoying when authors overdramatize Lily's hate toward him and I think you've found a happy medium to draw from here). Over all, entertaining chapter you've written. (:

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story so far, and it's wonderful to hear that you like the characters, and my approach to James and Lily. (I always felt like that scene in Snape's worst memory couldn't have been typical of James and Lily's interactions... years of such hostile feelings towards one another would have been really tiresome and I doubt they'd have gotten together!) Anyway, I'm really happy you liked the chapter! Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely review :)

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