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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hiya! I've been meaning to start on this for a while and saw it got updated and figured I might as well begin now.

I really like the whole idea of the story. Your summary gives just the right amount of information to draw in the reader and so it's really quite fascinating to see how you'll take this one from here.

You couldn't have started this off any better way. This first chapter is flawless.

I love the description you give in this. I like Tor already and she seems like a very well thought out character. The depth and detailing you gave to her was just right in the sense that it left me wanting more. I want to know more about her.

I liked the part of Tor's inner monologue best. When she began thinking about Death Eaters who she had once believed to be great people, people who showered her with love as a kid and people who she had known for so long were doing these cruel things. It really made me feel for her. I sympathized with her and her emotions were understandable. Everything about this was just perfect.

I loved the way you ended it:

These are dark times, when friend turns on friend and nobody is safe, not even daughters of Death Eaters.

I'm so amazed at that closer. It was something that I relished because it was so shaking. Yu worked magic with that.

Wonderful, and onto the next chapter I go!
~Nadia

Author's Response: Hi! :D Gah, sorry for taking so long to reply to your awesome (and often hilarious, hehe) reviews! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts on my story! :D

This prologue was the first part of this story I thought of and wrote, even really before I knew the character was going to be Tor. I'm so pleased you liked it, and that Tor comes across as likeable even though the chapter is quite short and sparse.

Writing Tor's inner monologue, which is often so angst written, is one of the best parts of writing this story since she flows so naturally. I'm glad you liked the contrast with the DEs being kind to her and cruel to others, and that you could sympathize for her.

I love that last line, and I'm pleased you liked it too and that it closed the chapter off well. :)

Thank you so much for reviewing, Nadia! :D


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