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Review:Remus says:
Heya! Perelandra here from the forums! So sorry that I took a while to get here! Better late than never, no? :D

This was...a bizarre! Haha! But it was funny! I absolutey loved your description. Specially at the beginning with the Gryffindor banner and when it was scaring the first years. I think I too would've been scared of something like that if I had been 10/11 years old! And of all the 'adults' around me acting like crazy.

By the way, the name Jessica Rowbottom made me laugh...I had a Despicable Me 2 moment. You know that part with the Minions laugh at Silas Ramsbottom? Yeah, that was me. Hahahaha! I have a mentality of a boy, I'm sorry! XD

"All of a sudden, Scorpius Malfoy, Rose's boyfriend declared that the giant squid was actually Hagrid in disguise." ---that line made me laugh and yet part of me, if I had been totally drunk like they were, would've believed it too and would've gone with the group to find out.

I busted out laughing when Ghost!Colin met his nephew and young Colin got freaked out. Nice touch there!

Your McGonagall was fantastic, just so you know!

Then the story got weird when Rose came home! I mean, Ron and Hermione...that was...bizarre and yeah... O_O I asked myself many times "what is going on here...?"

The end though!!! What was up with that! LOL!!! This story went from weird to a lot weirder! Hahaha! I felt like Rose towards the end when she saw the unicorn.

Overall this was good. I'm guessing the whole 'weirdness' is due to the challenge. It was well written so no worries there. And your description was great. The only CC I have is when Ron and Hermione are talking to Rose about the engagement, all you have is dialogue and not that much emotion/description of what its going on. Or going through Rose's head. That's it though, that's all the CC I have.

Good luck on the challenge! :D

--Rosie

Author's Response: Hi Rosie :)

Haha :P I'm glad you liked that bit and I know what you mean! Poor young first years would certainly be terrified, Gryffindor or not :P

Oh my gosh! I didn't notice the Ramsbottom/Rowbottom thing at all :O :P Hahaha! Have all the boy moments you want. I;m right there with you! :P

If I was drunk, I might have been the one saying it ;) But well, you can never say with such things :P Anyway, I'm glad you had a good laugh there. It's good to know I got the humour thing going :P

Thanks :) Colin meeting Ghost Colin would have been a pretty crazy sight, I think! Yay! Thanks :) I love Mcgonagall and I didn't want to mess her character up even though this IS a bizarre, parody-like thing :P

Hahaha :P I wrote this story and I haven't quite figured it out myself :P I agree with you. It just keeps on getting weirder :P

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it and had a laugh. The weirdness is definitely due to the challenge.

You have a good point there. I might just edit some more description into the bit. Talk about there emotions more :P

Thank you so much for the lovely review :)



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